So, I m terrible at expressing how I feel through actions. Most of the time, I write out my feelings to people. I stutter a lot and sometimes am hard to understand. As a result, my mother sometimes things I do not think much of or about her. However, this is not true. Tomorrow is her birthday, and I decided to write her a poem. So…I need critique, because I don’t want her to be confused or get the wrong message.
So,errrr here is a random poem -_-
I do not think anyone could be
As caring as you are to me.
Your smile grants the day new life;
Your love melts away my strife.
A love that’s pure–by hell untouched.
The love my mother gives so much.
In blaze of storms you grow your will–
A glowing soul no challenge can kill.
And so, I yell to all the Earth:
God bless the anniversary of Mother’s birth!
This mother would absolutely love to receive this from one of my children. It is beautiful and you are a very thoughtful person to create that for her. She will cherish it forever!
She hasn’t seen it yet. On her birthday, she feel ill on her birthday morning(she has been a bit sickly the past year or so). I am still going to give it to her, however. I just want to give it to her when she has recovered. She has been very tired and resting a lot. I think she will be up again by Friday. I will give it to her then. I’ll keep you guys updated
